Friday, September 2, 2016

I am reading a book Goosebumps BY: R.L. Stine called Egg Monsters From Mars. The charterers in this book so far is Brandy,Dana,Anne,Mom,and Dad. The main character out of the hole book is Dana  he is a kid how is into science and on his sisters birthday she had a egg hunt so him and his friend Anne had a cutest to see how could collect the most eggs.

His strategy to find the most eggs was to go were nobody less was. He found an egg not knowing it would Chang his life. The egg he found was green with blue and red veins pulsing out of it. All the sodden some one yelled egg fight and ever one when crazy. He wonted to show his friend Anna but she was participating in the egg fight . So he when up stars and put it in his dower because he wanted to anglicize it later .

The next day he heard a weird crack . He looked in the dower and  saw the egg was hatching . It was a gross yellow blob and he wonted to show his friend. She though it was a gross pile of rotten eggs so her mom was about to put in down the sink but then all the sudden.

9 comments:

  1. I think you had a really great blog, but some of it didn't make any sense. You just work on it for next time.

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  2. I think you had a really great blog, but some of it didn't make any sense. You just work on it for next time.

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  3. This is a good blog, but it isn't a complete summary and there are no text to text connections.

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    It's an OK blog- There were a lot of misspelled words, and no text to text connections.

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    This blog needs work. There were a lot of random words (I blame spellcheck), and NO text to text connections. It was an OK summary, but I don't think there were enough details. Keep on trying! You'll get it next time!

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  5. This a very good job but i would go back and check your spelling.Other wise then that you have good sentences and good job on your blog!

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  6. It seems like an good book. There wasn't a text to text connection and there was a lot of misspelled words. Your ending was a bit random and there wasn't a conclusion. You made me want to read this book so good job! Next time you know what to do better :D

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  7. I think it was a good summary and it made me want to read the book. Just chack your spelling you will do great next time ;)

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